This is Us
Sometimes life will surprise you. Starring Mandy Moore ("A Walk to
Remember"), Milo Ventimiglia ("Heroes," "Gilmore Girls") and Sterling K.
Brown ("The People v. O.J. Simpson: American Crime Story"), this
refreshingly honest and provocative series follows a unique ensemble. As
their paths cross and their life stories intertwine in curious ways, we
find that several of them share the same birthday and so much more than
anyone would expect. From the writer and directors of "Crazy, Stupid,
Love" comes a smart, modern dramedy that will challenge your everyday
presumptions about the people you think you know.
Premieres Tuesday, September 20st on NBC - Check your local listings. Look for the scoop on the new NBC drama and my review of the first episode on Thursday, the 21st!
Sunday, September 18, 2016
Fall Television is Here - This is Us
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Fall Television is Here - Designated Survivor
Designated Survivor
Kiefer Sutherland stars as Tom Kirkman, a lower-level cabinet member who is suddenly appointed President of the United States after a catastrophic attack on the US Capitol during the State of the Union. Kirkman will struggle to keep the country and his family from falling apart, while navigating the highly-volatile political arena and leading the search to find who is responsible for the attack.
Premieres Wednesday, September 21st on ABC - Check your local listings. Look for the scoop on the new ABC drama and my review of the first episode on Thursday, the 22nd!
Kiefer Sutherland stars as Tom Kirkman, a lower-level cabinet member who is suddenly appointed President of the United States after a catastrophic attack on the US Capitol during the State of the Union. Kirkman will struggle to keep the country and his family from falling apart, while navigating the highly-volatile political arena and leading the search to find who is responsible for the attack.
Premieres Wednesday, September 21st on ABC - Check your local listings. Look for the scoop on the new ABC drama and my review of the first episode on Thursday, the 22nd!
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Fall Television is Here - Michael Weatherly Returns to TV in Bull!
Bull
A renowned psychologist heads a prolific trial consulting service in this drama series based on the early career of Dr. Phil McGraw.
Premieres Tuesday, September 20th on CBS - Check your local listings and look for the scoop on the new CBS drama and my review of the first episode on Wednesday, the 21st!
A renowned psychologist heads a prolific trial consulting service in this drama series based on the early career of Dr. Phil McGraw.
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Tuesday, August 2, 2016
New ABC Drama Conviction Looks Like a Hit!
Stay Tuned for the Scoop on Conviction and all of the upcoming Fall Shows for 2016!
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Thursday, July 28, 2016
Serenity Lost- Trust Me Book 1 Excerpt
Their brief
heated meeting one fateful night had singed itself into their minds. Not
knowing of the other’s identity, but unable to forget, had sealed their fate.
The fire smoldered quietly in each of them as they tried to move on with their
lives.
Eric Stiles was
in the middle of chaos, searching for a killer.
Hunted by an
obsessed psychopath Rebecca Gailen was trying to be strong.
The world stopped
for a moment as they looked up and saw the other standing just feet away.
His heart
lurched, her armor shattered and the world started again as Eric’s brother,
Charlie, appeared to take her hand.
Family loyalty
isn’t a choice. When Rebecca’s stalker rages out of control, Eric’s decision
haunts him and he struggles to stay away. Can he remain loyal to his brother,
even if it means abandoning Rebecca when she may need him the most?
***
"Hey, thanks
for coming."
“Thanks for the
address.”
“What’s going
on?’
“I think she got
a visit from our friend this evening,” he replied, still looking for Rebecca.
“Really, when?”
“Not sure, that’s
what I’m here to find out. Where is she?”
“Other side of
the bar,” Donna replied with a small wince.
His eyes found
her. She was sitting on top of the bar, laughing and teasing a group of men
surrounding her.
“She started
doing shots, as soon as she hung up on you.”
“Okay,” he
replied with a deep breath and wondered how he was going to handle this. She
looked like she was having fun, although his stomach clenched at the thought of
someone else's arms around her. “Maybe I should just leave her be. She’s been
through enough the past few days.”
“Which is exactly
why you need to go over there,” Donna insisted. “She's not thinking straight.
She isn't listening to me and Charlie isn't available.”
The comment wasn’t
meant to, but it stung. He was third on the list. Fourth, if you counted Mindy.
Eric nodded in agreement and walked around the bar to the engaging crowd.
Perched on the bar, her long legs were crossed and wrapped in a mid-length
black skirt. She wasn't flaunting anything, she was just smiling and laughing.
The small gathering of men were making comments and even began singing to her.
Eric stood at the
back of the group, waiting for her to see him. He couldn’t help but become lost
in the sight of her. Since their unexpected reunion, he hadn’t really been able
to just look at her, take her in and see once again how stunning she was. From
her fiery locks to her thin ankles. His entire body began to pulse at the
memory of her softness beneath him. He took a deep breath as her eyes caught
his and instead of the expected scowl, she smiled and tilted her head as she
had in the coffee shop.
“Look out, boys,
the cops are here to rescue me,” she said as she leaned forward.
He pushed his way
between her suitors until his chest brushed against her legs. “May I have this
dance?” he asked as he looked up into her eyes.
“Depends,” she
answered as her hands rested on his shoulders.
Eric grasped her
waist and lifted her off the bar, resting her on the floor in front of him. “On
what?”
“Whether you're
here for business or pleasure.”
“Dancing with
you,” he said in a low breath, as his body reacted to her softness against him,
his hands still wrapped around her small waist. “Definitely pleasure.”
She looked up at
him and the room seemed to disappear. A serenity that he'd only felt once
before encompassed him. The weight of the world seemed to lift when he stared
into the electric pools of her eyes, and he wondered how that could be.
“I wish that were
true,” she said.
He saw doubt and
pain flash in her eyes. “Rebecca…” he started when the popping of a champagne
bottle startled her. She jumped away from him as her entire body visibly
trembled. She ran her fingers through her hair, and he watched her look for
something familiar. Her eyes found Donna and she walked past him to her
friend...
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Tuesday, July 26, 2016
The Reader in Me
Barbie is hanging precariously from the hardware of my
mother's drapes, while Ken runs to her rescue. Neighborhood war is declared.
Ammunition and walkie-talkies are dispersed after a lunch of grilled cheese
sandwiches and kool-aide milkshakes. Charlie has a new assignment for his
Angels. They will be teaming with Bo & Luke Duke to secure the micro-chip
hidden in the barn via bikes. Even when the small town of Macungie, PA is
quiet, it is necessary for a girl to keep a fake gun her purse. You never know
when Archangel may arrive in his helicopter with a crisis.
My childhood was a mix of television, books, and pure
imagination. There was and is always some adventure brewing in my head. A constant stream of images of what if's about the world, my favorite characters,
and everything in between.
As a child these images were acted out in play, and
then later on the stage and on paper. To be honest, not much has changed. I
started writing as an addition to imaginary playtime. It was a catalog of
events, and when we would do what. When Barbie would finally kiss Ken, or how
Chris Monroe would find out her partner Kelly was captured by the villain. My
muse developed a taste for adventure, and I explored it through acting,
theater, screenwriting, and then finally the almighty novel.
My books start as a song lyric, a single line of dialog, or
an image. There is also a magical time
of day (or night) my Muse loves, specifically, the time when you are laying in
that place halfway between an awake mind and slumber. It is a magical realm,
and many a scene and a lot of dialog have spawned from that place of peace.
Romantic Suspense is a natural flow of energy for me. It
fits my personality. I have attempted other genres, and I have always ended up
with the 38 Special in my hand bag. For
me, love is no fun without some treachery, and a few life and death moments.
One of the challenges I put forth on myself in writing any novel is first, I
have to love it, and second, there must be a balance. Too many times I will
read romantic suspense and it is more romance than suspense or visa-versa. I
want a good chunk of both. I want them to drive each other. I love reading romantic suspense, and frankly
I was unable to find a book that fulfilled the above need, so I wrote my own.
The inspiration for my first published novel started small. I became intrigued
by the relationship of two brothers on a popular television show, and I started
watching a little closer. Then the lyrics of a song developed the plot and angst,
and I went with it--Two people, breathless and desperate to kiss each other but
unable to act on their feelings. I focused on the single image, rolling all of
the possibilities in my head. Why wouldn’t they be able to fulfill their
desires? What was holding them back, and what would make them so desperate to
act? Where did the need to be in the others embrace stem from? What were the
consequences if they acted on their desires?
The answers to each of these questions are of course
endless, but in the end Trust Me was born. The two people became Rebecca Gailen
and Eric Stiles. The scene wound up in a very different place than I imagined.
It, and its consequences, were shattering to both characters. The Trust Me
Trilogy is my all time favorite series of books. As a reader, they have
everything I want in a romantic suspense! There is action, suspense, romance,
chemistry, passion, angst, ranting, crying, fighting, deception... you name it,
it's in there. As a reader I think I succeeded in my efforts, creating tales
you can immerse yourself in and experience the adventure from the comfort of
your favorite chair.
They tell every writer to write what they love. I am a
writer because I love to read. I can only hope readers love what I write.
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Sunday, July 24, 2016
Dead Air Collection - Excerpt
Worlds Apart
Is their love enough?
Jack Tucker's life as
a morning radio host is uncomplicated, attachment free, and without regret.
Until Kate Weiss entered his life, that is... She knows all of the ways to
annoy him and yet takes his breath away with just a look.
Special Agent Kate
Weiss is hiding from a kidnapping she doesn't remember. Morning Radio Host Jack
Tucker serves as a nice distraction, but she knows the flirtation could never
be anything more.
When tragedy
descends, grief pulls them together, forcing them to trust each other and face
the undeniable connection between them.
In an effort to make
the pair walk away from a conspiracy greater than they can imagine, a target is
put on their heads. This does little to deter Kate or Jack from wanting to find
the truth.
Chasing shadows, the
answers are closer than they realize. Forced into isolation, can Jack and Kate
uncover the buried secret that is getting people killed? Or will one misstep
destroy all of their hopes for the future?
***
Heated bodies were pushed together like fish caught in a
very expensive net. Jack maneuvered his way to the bar, and requested a whiskey
sour. He stood waiting patiently, his eyes staring unfocused at the design
etched into the marble top of the bar. He felt a heat on his back. He turned in
curiosity when his shoulder smacked into something.
“Whoa,” he heard, and then saw Kate, her drink dripping from
her hand.
“Sorry,” He found himself staring at her, a lump in his
throat, his neck heated. “I didn’t see you.”
“It’s okay.” She moved to the spot next to him at the bar.
She placed her drink on the bar and began to clean the alcohol from her hands
and dress.
“You should know better than to try and navigate through a
crowd with a full drink.”
“I’ll make a note for next time, thanks.” She tossed the
used napkins on the bar and then looked back to him. “This is quite a place.”
“It stands out.” His focus went back to the crowd.
“Are you having a good time?”
“Can’t complain.”
“I haven’t seen Chris. Is he having a good time?”
“Wouldn’t know, he disappeared about an hour ago.” The
bartender arrived with his drink. Jack laid some money on the bar before
grabbing the glass.
“I’d better get back to Mike.” She excused herself stepping
away from the bar.
“I’ll go with you.”
What are you doing?
They made it halfway across the floor, before engulfed in a
deadlock of people. Jack instinctively grabbed Kate’s hand pushing a path
through to the other side. Not realizing the warmth of her hand within his
until they reached Mike, he quickly released and shoved his own in his pocket.
“Hey, Jack, I see you found her,” Mike said with a grin,
scotch in his hand. “I thought you got lost.”
“Not exactly, just delayed.” Mike’s blackberry lit up and he
grabbed it and began to read.
“Crap,” Mike said, looking to Jack and Kate. “There’s a
problem at the station. I have to go. Jack, will you do me a favor and take
Kate home?”
“I can grab a cab, Mike. Jack doesn’t need to--”
“You’re not taking a cab, Kate,” Mike looked to Jack for
support.
“It’s fine,” Kate’s expression crinkled in discomfort. “We
have plenty of room.”
Kate finally nodded in agreement and Mike smiled.
“Great, you guys have fun and I’ll see you later.” He
stepped forward squeezing Kate’s hand. Mike moved away from them and Jack looked
to Kate, his heart pounding uncontrolled.
“We should probably get back to the VIP room.” The area
around them began to fill with an overflow of people.
“Okay.” Jack led the way to where their party was
congregating. Once again, they ran into traffic between point A and point B.
Jack consciously kept his hand to himself, letting her push her way through
behind him. The crowd swayed taking them with it and he found himself trapped
against the far wall. He looked to his
left and saw Kate in the same situation. She made her way along the wall toward
him. A tornado of thrashing dancers erupted around them and Jack instinctively
used his body to protect her. The crowd once again crashed like a wave against
the wall. He felt the pressure lessen
and he looked down meeting her emerald eyes.
His body tingled, reacting to the softness against him. “They really
need to do something about crowd control.”
“I’ll be sure to mention it in my review,” he said, her
scent filling him.
Peaches
“Should we try and move?” She pushed her hair off her
shoulder, revealing a gently curved neck begging to be nibbled.
“I don’t know.” Catching her eyes. “Usually, this where I
get thanked for my selfless act of chivalry.”
“You’ve already gotten one blow-job this evening, Tucker,”
she hit back. “I would have thought the Viagra would’ve worn off by now.”
Her eyes breathed fire. She shoved him away and dove into
the crowd. Jack followed and arrived on the steps of the VIP area a few moments
behind her arrival. He saw Melissa meet her with a wide smile.
“Kate!” Melissa cooed while embracing the woman. “I was
looking for you, when did you get here? Where’s Mike?”
“He had to take off. Kate is going to hang out with us for
the remainder of the evening. I offered to give her a lift home,” Jack said
with a little too much enthusiasm. Like a dog that caught a rabbit and was
proudly displaying it to his master.
“Awesome, this gives me a chance to introduce you to some of
our friends!”
Melissa whisked Kate away to fashion and celebrity heaven.
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Tuesday, July 12, 2016
Review: Moving In by Ron Ripley
Moving
In (Moving In Series Book 1) by Ron Ripley
“Iron…and…salt,”
whispers the old man. The dead old man. “Hurry or it will be too late…”
To
escape the stress of living in the city and the anxiety of his high pressure
job, Brian Roy moves his family to the country. His wife loves the easy living,
but Brian hates it…especially when weird things start happening in the house.
When he discovers a dead body in the woods and a burial ground in his basement,
Brian could never imagine the shocking history of the house or its former
occupants that comes to light.
As
his life starts to unravel, Brian isn’t so sure living in the country is going
to be the oasis of peace he and his wife expected. Lately, his home has become
a haunting den of hell.
**Spoilers**
Started the book with enthusiasm and walked away
disappointed. To me, I wanted more about the characters, more about Brain and
his wife, there was very little said or referenced about their relationship so
I was not as invested as I wanted to be. The ghosts and their presence were a
backdrop to one particular ghost who seemed more like a hoodlum thug than a
paranormal entity. Nothing really scared me in the book, and when it ended I
wasn’t overly understanding of why Brian would become a paranormal
investigator. He had an experience and now it was over. I get it, I know the
bridge. We got the character from point A to point B and he changed but while
the journey was mildly interesting I wanted more depth and commitment from the
author.
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Wednesday, July 6, 2016
The Kiss - The Pivotal Scene in Any Romance
Little girl’s dreams are built around it. Boys brag about it,
and it's the force driving every book I write. Romance all about the kiss, not
just any kiss, ‘the kiss’. Sounds like a pretty weak way to drive
anything, but that is my focal point. The first kiss and then the renewal kiss.
In any romance the basic bare bones plot is usually the same. Boy meets girl, boy gets girl, boy loses
girl, boy wins girl back. Obviously
there are a million variations of this but the core is the same. So for a
writer to truly translate their vision we must have a focus.
In my latest erotic novella, the entire novel started out as
a single moment. A passionate, unexpected, but wanted moment between two
professional people. I focused on the single image rolling all of the
possibilities in my head, why wouldn’t they be able to fulfill their desires?
What was holding them back and what would make them so desperate to act? Where
did the need to be in the others embrace stem from? What were the consequences
if they acted on their desires? The answers to each of these are of course
endless, but in the end You Never Could Be was born. The two people became Sara
and Will.
Will finished his
conversation, and hung up his phone, having booked himself on the next
available flight. Highway assistance had solved their lug nut challenge, and
they were back on the road to the airport. Sara saw the exit and glanced at him
with a grin, her stomach churning. His phone beeped and he glanced at the
screen with an audible sigh.
“Is everything okay?”
“Uh, yeah, it’s fine.”
“You don’t sound so
convinced.”
“I’m not.” His focus
went toward the window a deafening quiet lying between them once again.
“Are you going out of
the same terminal?”
“Yeah, I think so,
American.”
She grabbed her
drive-through pass and headed to the terminal. The curb side thorough-way was
closed. She pulled into the garage and found a space. Sara was unwilling to
break the boundary of silence he’d put up, and wordlessly popped the hatch.
“Make sure you get a
new tire. You shouldn’t be driving on the donut for longer than a day.” He came
around the side, pulling his luggage from the back.
“I will.” She pulled her
fingers against her hair. The tension was killing her, and she’d had enough.
“Will…”
“They’re replacing
me.” Her blood turned to ice.
“What?”
“The phone call, it
was Regan. They decided to split the departments, and my position has been
absorbed into the transition.” Unable to deal with the news without emotion,
she turned away from him. “There are a couple of positions available in
Phoenix. They are setting up interviews for me.”
“When?”
“I’ll announce it
Monday. They want me to work through the transition so probably a few weeks.”
“I can’t believe this
is happening. Will, you’ve been—“
“It’s okay Sara. It’s
not personal. We knew with all the changes' stuff like this was going to
happen.”
“Yeah, but not to us.”
She saw him take a
deep breath before he closed the hatch. Her emotions rose to her chest and she
wasn’t sure what to do. She did her best to gulp it back.
“Well at least, you’ll
be around for the next few weeks, so I can still harass you when needed.” She
meant for the statement to be light, but it came out like a final farewell.
“You’ll have to come up with an excuse to come visit. I’m sure the group of us
can come up with a plausible justification.”
“I’ll be around.”
“I know you will.
You're always around when I…we need you.” His eyes bore through her, and her
body involuntarily tightened. “You’d…uh…you’d better get moving or you’re going
to miss your plane again.”
“Yeah, I think I would
have a hard time using the flat tire excuse twice.”
“Have a safe trip.”
She stepped into him, wrapping her arm loosely over his shoulder in a hug. Her
heart raced at the solid heat of his body against hers. “Let me know if you
need anything. Seriously, if you need anything just call.”
“You too.”
She nodded and went to
step back, his hand lingering on her hip. She hesitated. He moved, and she took
another step. He threw his laptop case over his shoulder and unfolded his
luggage before waving good-bye.
Heaviness settled on
her chest, forcing a deep sigh. Her mind felt thick, and she pulled herself away,
getting in her truck. She lifted the handle when the smacking of hurried
footsteps against concrete got her attention.
“Sara!”
She spun on her heel
following his voice around the truck.
“Did you forget
something?” He didn’t respond just kept walking, a startling determination in
his eyes. She waited in open confusion. He kept coming and before she could
react, his hand curled on the back of her neck. His mouth crushed hers with a
heated demand and she had no choice but to give in. She opened beneath him, and
his tongue diving into her mouth. He shifted his arm, wrapping it around her
waist, resting on the small of her back. His mouth still dominating her
attention, his overpowering torso pressed her against the truck. She was
trapped, unable to escape his possessed siege of her mouth.
The kiss broke, and
they both gasped for air. His eyes searched her face, his fingers kneading her
neck. He wordlessly pulled at her lips, and her hands balled against his chest.
She took another gasp of air, looking up into his heavy-lidded eyes. "Don't
go.”
In my first romantic suspense series, ‘Trust Me’, we have two
people, breathless and desperate to kiss each other but unable to act on their
feelings. The two people became Rebecca and Eric, the scene wound up in a very
different place than I imagined it and the consequences were shattering to both
of them.
Eric sat for a moment,
letting the advice settle in his gut before he rose from the table. He made is
way down the hall and over to the kitchen. He popped a few quarters in the
vending machine his mind heavy in thought.
Just promise me, if
you find her you won't walk away…
Then the world
literally stopped. I looked up and there she was smiling at me as she said
hello.
I wish that were true…
He made his way back
to the conference room, two sodas in hand. He rounded the corner and bumped
into someone. He heard a gasp and he turned. Her blue eyes looked at him in
terror.
"Beccs."
He'd scared her again.
Damn it what was she
doing out here alone?
She was breathless and
he watched her body begin to quake. Her eyes watering, she looked to him
helpless. He grasped her hand and scanned his ID before he led her into an
empty conference room. She propped herself against the wall and he shut the
door. Her trembling worsened while tears slid down her cheeks.
He pulled her into his
chest wrapping his arms around her protectively until the trembling passed. She
clung to him and he pulled her tighter against him, kissing the top of her
head.
After a few minutes
she seemed to calm. He looked down at her, his hand grazing her hair. She met
his gaze, her cheeks still wet with tears.
"Okay?" He
gently wiped her tears away with his thumb.
A quiet desperation
shone back at him and he drowned in her eyes. His heart refused to be ignored.
The walls he'd so carefully built crumbled like ash. Eric leaned down pressing
his lips against hers, his hands pushing into her hair. He covered her mouth
and a rush of fire swept through him. Her lips were warm and sweet. She opened
up to him and he pulled her closer to him devouring her mouth. They melted
together into one enduring embrace.
She pull away, their
lips parted, and his heart screamed in protest.
"We can't do
this," she said in a breathless whisper. His forehead rested against hers,
eyes closed, fighting the need to kiss her again. "Eric…"
"If it was anyone
else…" his voice a deep growl talking his way back from her warmth,
"Rebecca I--"
Her warm hand rested
against his cheek and stabs of pain pushed at him like his heart was being
ripped from his body. He tried to catch his breath. Her eyes were brimming with
life, pain, and unquenchable warmth.
She rose up on her
toes. His arms still wrapped around her, she kissed him once more. Full of
emotion and regret, her lips fit within his. She broke away and lowered herself
back to the ground. Unable to pull away from her eyes, he could see the strain
and exhaustion she fought to hide. His hand grazed her hair and her eyes closed.
Like the screaming of
an alarm, his cell phone rang. Her eyes opened looking at him with strength,
hiding the pain and fear only he could see. Her shoulders squared, her back
stiffened and her arms dropped from his chest.
Eric kept her
resilient but anguished gaze. He dropped his arms from their protective
position around her. She took a step back. His cell phone rang again. She took
another step and turned toward the door. He struggled with not being able to
touch her, or hold her. She glanced back but within seconds she disappeared. It
was a torture beyond his imagination and it was killing him.
His phone rang again
and he pulled it from his pocket.
"This is
Detective Stiles."
So that was the beginning of the Trust Me series, or at
least the kernel of inspiration. Now
that was not the first kiss, nor would it be the last, but it is a crucial part
of the plot. First kisses as I stated are of monumental importance to me. They
have to be perfect. They have to feel honest, real and natural. One of my pet
peeves is to have a kiss feel rushed or awkward, or when as the reader I am
saying – where the hell did that come from. There has to be a build up, tension
and finally the explosion that lifts the characters story to the next level.
In Shockwave, the first kiss is the turning point in the
novel. It is the place where the reader is finally satisfied by the flirt. Kate
Weiss and Jack Tucker are from two different worlds, he is always in the
spotlight and she is always behind it. In the beginning of the story Jack and
Kate hate each other until Kate is attacked by a group of thugs. From there, the flirt is on and in this scene
the readers are given what they have been hoping for…
It took a little time, but they managed to make their way
out and hail a cab back to the hotel. Stumbling into the hotel laughing, they
managed to navigate their way to the elevators. They stepped in, and
concurrently forgot the floor of their rooms.
“Twenty-three Three is sticking in my brain.” She leaned
against the back of the elevator.
“Twenty-three Three it is,” Jack pushed the button and
leaned against the wall next to her.
“You’d think they would put it on your key or something.”
“What’s your room number?” His brain flipped like a coin in
mid-air.
“2509.” He looked at her with a smile. “Seriously?”
She reached forward, pushed the button for twenty-five. He
laughed.
“What’s your room number, Tucker?”
“Ah…I…well…I have no fucking idea!”
“See!” She stepped back leaning next him. “So I don’t want
to hear any sass out of you about my 23!”
“My sass will remain closed.” The heat of her body made his
head spin more than it already was.
“That’s why!”
“Why what?”
“I finally understand why she calls you Sass. I didn’t see
it before, but now I definitely agree that you are…”
Abruptly the doors opened and they turned to move out of
the elevator. He realized they were on the wrong floor and pulled her back.
“What are you doing?”
“Twenty-five remember, not twenty-three.”
“Oh yeah,” She turned to him with a lopsided smile. It hit
him like a hammer. He realized it was the first time he had ever really seen
her smile. It lit up her face, and he
couldn’t help but smile back. “Do you know that saying?”
“What saying?”
“The whole, what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas thing.”
“Yes, I am familiar with it.” The doors of the elevator
opened again, and he gently turned her around moving her forward into the
hallway.
“Well you need to make sure you understand that saying
because well…” She rummaged through her pockets for her key. “I am breaking so
many rules right now you wouldn’t believe.”
“Rules?” She stopped at her door leaning against it, key
card in hand.
Jack watched her struggle to maintain her mental and
physical balance.
“Yes, rules. Many, many rules.”
“What kind of rules?” Warmth enveloped him. Her scent and
deep eyes drew him in, and he was powerless to resist.
“Important rules.” His palms rested on the door trapping
her between his arms, and a deep sigh escaped her lips. “Very important rules.”
“Kate,” He breathed her in, just inches away from her lips,
her emerald eyes shining brightly up at him.
“Yes?”
“Forget the rules.” He caressed her cheek with his thumb,
his heart pounding against his chest. Jack let go of his fear, and covered her
mouth with a passionate kiss.
He expected the moment of surprise. Then she kissed him
back, her arms wrapping around his neck pulling him closer. After a hesitant
but passion filled exploration of the other's lips, their touch parted, and he
bit back a groan. He didn’t want to stop. He wanted to keep kissing her
forever.
****
A little steamy, right-- Well all
of that flirting tends to build up a little tension…and POW!
The kiss is a powerful weapon in
the romantic suspense, more so than in other genres. The kiss is a prize, a
reward for hard work and a job well done. You have managed to stay alive, here
is your treat…you get the girl / guy!
Every writer has something that
propels them forward, the kernel of truth they search out.
I ask you, with the utmost
sincerity, what is more honest than a kiss? You cannot fake a kiss, not a real
one anyway. It has the power to sway opinions, cease and cause wars, make you
faint, swoon and or gag. For me, the kiss is the first breath of love, it is an
act of passion and most of all awareness.
There is no way to deny, retract or ignore a real kiss, not even if you
want to.
The core of my writing is the kiss
in all of its glorious forms, whether is it a first kiss or a kiss goodbye, it
is always memorable. It is my job to make you remember why.
Labels:
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The Kiss,
Trust Me,
You Never Could Be
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Tuesday, July 5, 2016
Unique Character in a Shadowy World - Homecoming By Scott Langrel
Finn McCoy is a
paranormal handler. He handles things that ordinary paranormal investigators
can't or won't, and he often ends up cleaning up behind them.
For fifteen years,
McCoy has turned his back on his hometown of Shallow Springs, Virginia, and the
dark secrets the town harbors. But now an evil, unstoppable force has been
unleashed on the unsuspecting residents of the town, and McCoy finds himself
the only thing standing between the town and total destruction.
Review
Homecoming, is a well-paced, well written suspense horror.
The main character, Finn McCoy is down to earth and home-grown which makes him
likeable. He and his beat up pick-up truck named Boo seem to make a perfect
pair. Mr. McCoy even has a girlfriend he apparently picked up on a previous
case, her name is Amanda and she seems to be the right temperament for a
paranormal handler, smart and stubborn.
I enjoyed the way Langrel created and described McCoy’s
world. Much like our own, but the a few more shadows and a little less light. The story was uniquely presented, has a few
twists and an overall happy ending for almost all (well someone has to die, it
is after all a horror!). I didn’t find the book scary at all but then again it
takes a lot to give me goosebumps.
Looking forward to reading the rest of the series.
Buy it now HERE
Labels:
Book Review,
Homecoming,
Review,
Scott Langrel,
Supernatural Horror
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